Friday, August 3, 2012
Ode to tree
Sorry Because of us you are cut in half. Tree you always beside us and when ever I see you I feel sorry and sad. Your'e always green and gives us the color of nature. You are our hope for making structures and some architectures. Chairs made by tree, houses made by tree. I am sorry that we are cutting many of you guys.
You always hide us from the sun when we are hot. You give many animals place to live, and food to the animals. When ever I am under you I feel calm and forget everything I was thinking about. Thank you for everything and, sorry to everything. You are giving us a hope and courage to children because, you are made in various kinds of toy, and gives us place to live. Thank you to tree.
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Hi. Your new writing TA Sohyeon here. Your theme is touching: the sacrifice of trees. I like how you talked about two parallel emotions, gratitude and remorse. I think you could have talked about many other things and lengthened your piece a bit. There are some grammatical errors that may be corrected. Perhaps you should seek a TA for help.
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